Kia ora and welcome back to my blog. Over the week for reading we have been focused on happiness. We are learning to be happy right in the moment and to be happy for what you have got. Here is a slide about being happy with what you have got. What makes you happy?
Thanks for reading my work.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Dear Sophie,
ReplyDeleteThat was Amazing! I can tell that you worked really hard on your book. I think that everyone will love it! Maybe next time you could add more capital letters at the start of scentences and at the name of things. My friends make me Happy. What makes you happy?
Kia ora Sophie,
ReplyDeleteI loved reading your book. You have given the message of being happy across in a very appealing manner, I like the illustrations you have used. Just for the future, remember that names have capitals at the start. I still forget this myself sometimes. I think that it very easy for us to always want more and we tend to forget what we have is enough. I know that sometimes I have to remember this message. I am usually happy when I am out walking out in nature with my family. Just in the moment. What makes your happy?
Hi Sophie, You have made an awesome book for the children in Kākano, how lucky are they! Don't forget that people names need to be capital letters and just check that you don't have capital letters in the middle of sentences. Things that make me happy are my family and friends. What things make you happy Sophie?
ReplyDeleteMrs Bryce
Thank you Michelle
ReplyDeletefor the comment. I will change my slide to have capital letters for names. Lot's of things make me happy but the thing that makes me a lot happy is horse riding.
Hi there Mrs Bryce
ReplyDeleteThank you for the comment. I will change my slide to have capital letter's for the name of people. The thing that makes me happy is horse riding. Do you have a hobby that makes you happy?
Kia ora Sophie
ReplyDeleteThank you for the comment. I will change my slide to have capital letters for the peoples names. the thing that makes me happy is horse riding. Do you have a pet or a hobby that makes you happy?